domingo, 13 de mayo de 2012

Shortfilm - The Monster of the Toilets - Asesoría Felipe Molina L. & José Alexander Estrada





Dentro de una casa hay una niña que plácidamente duerme, el aire del ventilador la adormece aún más, pero de repente se escucha un ruido de algo que se rompe, la niña inmediatamente abre los ojos y se levanta exaltada. Al salir de la alcoba ve lo que había sucedido, alguien o algo ha hecho destrozos en su casa. Sin saber qué hacer, la niña  recuerda a una amiga que es detective, la llama, le cuenta lo ocurrido y le pide que le ayude. Horas después, llega la detective y se pone en acciones y se da cuenta de que hay huellas de pies que recorren toda la casa, allí mira a su alrededor y se da cuenta que de la taza del sanitario sale una corbata, instintivamente, descarga el baño y sin esperarlo se escucha el grito de algo que se lo traga el desagüe. Asustada, la detective sale corriendo y abandona el lugar. ¿Qué pudo haber  sido eso? Se escucha a la locutora que pregunta “¿será el fin?”. 


59 comentarios:

  1. clara liliana hernandez pineda 9b

    it's very comic and fun......and i think that the dog is the prinsipal actor because it is very prety...... :3

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  2. That film is very funny,I love the reaction of the first girl when "something" crushed!, The use of the camera is very professional, liked the shot where you can see through the magnifying glass.... And the background music is perfect for the short film.

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  3. Catalina Orozco 8B

    The story doesn’t make much sense to me and I also find it uninteresting but I admit they have creativity.

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  4. I like very much this short film because they made an exelent work with the camera,the story was very creative and the background music was perfect for the short film...I love the dog too, it`s a very good actor.

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  5. NAME : MARIANA VELASQUEZ RUIZ 9A
    for me is the worst short film, I saw a movie that has that plot, the film did not cause fear or curiosity or suspense, the film makes me laugh because it's so overacted.

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  6. i think the story had no imagination, is too unreal, i did not like !

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  7. Ana Sofia Victoria Galan 8B

    I believe that this video is really good! it´s funny, and the dog was so cute,it was also really creative, camera was good.

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  8. Mariana Sanchez 8A
    For me the story was very creative and the acting was good, it would have been better if the actresses talk.

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  9. LUISA MARÍA GIRALDO 9B
    i think that the short film need more creativity, it was unreal, the traces were horrible, it was boring,the main actress was overacted, i didnt like it

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  10. I did not like the video, had no suspense or excitement, very well recorded

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    1. MARIA ADELAIDA TOBON 10B
      the story is very Creative but it needs to have suspense to impress the viewers

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  12. paula andrea arango 10B
    the story is very interesting, but lacks much suspense, I really do not like

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  13. Mariana Galeano 8A
    Hahahaha.... i liked very much my own video. i think that we were so creative and i liked that my little dog acted, she is so beautiful. i love the Adel's music, so i put the song "Rolling in the deep" in the film. i know that this film isn't the best video but i think that it is so funny and we spent much time doing that...

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  14. I think it is very interesting and well done

    8º-B

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  15. maria isabel osorio gomez #20 8a

    this is a very creaty video he camara is very good is very fun video i love

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  16. Maria Paulina Orrego 10b

    Is un short film very good has good scenes and scenery, is a short film funny but lacks a little suspense

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  17. The film is good, is funny and and produces a little scary. I like the dog. Although panic occurs is very short, is good.

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  18. It was good, but it didn't have sense for me, i didn't get it..anyway tha music, audio and sound was good :)

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  19. Laura Romero 8B
    I love this film, the music is perfect for the occasion, the effects of the camera are very professional ...it would have been better if the characters talk., but the short film in general is excellent

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  20. carolina morales montoya 9°A

    I had a lot of fun with this film, but I think that it supposed to be a fail film and not a funny film. However it is a good work.

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  21. Hahahaha i like!! because very good work, good camera handling, but a little fictitious and I loved when the dog did the flip :)

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  22. the previous comment: DIANA GIRALDO RESTREPO - 9B

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  23. Juliana martinez gonzalez 8A

    this is a shortfilm that although it hasn´t conversations, you can figure out what´s making but i think that is missing more creative.

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  24. Ana Maria Solorzano A. 9B

    Was so funny, but I think that it was supposed to be a scary film, however it's a good film !!. I loved the dog, the work with the camera and the music.

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  25. I don´t like this video at all because It´s too unreal but I appreciate the dedication. Maybe in another opportunity they can make a better job, I think that the video needs more dialogue, I like the starring of the actress.

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  26. Estefanía López 9B

    This short film is original because I had never seen anything like that, but not much fun and not much plot. I liked the sound and camera effects. In my personal opinion I like to finish well..

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  27. Valentina Echavarria Naranjo 8B
    I think the shortfilm is very fun and interesting, the music is in keeping with the occasion.

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  28. sara isabel grajales tamayo 9B

    it has an intersting plot.
    the film is funny because of the reactions of the actors.
    they did a very good job with the camara.
    some details where out of place, for example the phone hanging of the curtain.
    i reallly liked the dogs performance, i think it has future in this business.
    they were so creative doing a mute short film and th.e clothes of the girl were so funny

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  29. the plot is really good,they made a great job with the camera and understanding the story is easy although they don't talk, the dog is very cute and well trained, it may be in real movies.

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  30. the shortfilm is very good, and the job of the camera... this girl worked very good

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  31. Mariam Hernandez Espinosa 9B
    This plot is really good!
    I think is funny, the tematic of the monster in the toilet, I really like it.
    And is very is interesting that they do not speak and you understand everything that happened, The dog is so kiut I love it.

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  32. SUSANA RUIZ PALACIO 9A
    this movie is soooooooooo funny I liked it a lot
    is a good representation of the silent film
    and the background song is the perfect for the film
    god job i like it

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  33. The short film has a very good cameraman because it sees with clarity everything that happens in history.The footsteps could be smaller so that it would be more real history

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  34. Valentina Carvajal 8A
    The video is interesting and creative, I think it was very well recorded and the characters do a good performance

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  35. Isabella Bedoya 10B
    i don't like too much,i expected more action and drama and suspense.

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  36. paulina calle correa 10B

    i dont like it. but I appreciate the dedication

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  37. The video is good. I like the dog role, it was funny. Even don't talk the video has sense. Good job with the cameras and sond. I think it could have been better

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  38. i didn't like it too much
    the short film was bored
    but i appreciate the fact that they worked hard for this film
    the actors did a great job but they could do it better

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  39. i don't like it....this shortfilm doesn't have any sense for me....i would like that the monster really show up!! Att: Guadalupe Botero 9B

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  40. MANUELA BEDOYA GIRALDO 9B
    I seem that is so funny but don’t have emotion always was the same, but I liked when the dog help them and has a tread in the stomach
    i like the song and the actresses, great job

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  41. MARIANA MU?OZ ARCILA 9B
    I liked the acting of the girls but i was confused i didnt understand the story because the actors dont talk

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  42. esteania giraldo montoya #9 8a

    I loved the video, I found very good, very interesting and very creative, I think they used the cameras very well, the character I liked most was the dog :)

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  43. Valentina Puerta Mejia 9A

    I think this shortfilm was creative, different and very funny, i loved the dog with the traces and although no one talked it was a good story

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  44. Mariana Gutierrez uribe 9a
    its a good film but i think that can be better

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  45. DANIELA PELAEZ RAMIREZ 9B

    I think that although they don’t speak a lot, the video does not make you lose. On the contrary, this makes it more interesting because you are more becarefully for anything that might happen, especially when the detective are views and analyzes each traces of this strange person who has traces all over the house. I liked the excellent handling of the camera and the colors they used.

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  46. Melissa Cardenas Diaz 9 B

    I think that this shortfilm is very creative and enterteining, but there are several things that I do not understand for example the actresses they do not speak

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  47. valentina martinez rendon 8-B

    i found very interesting as they all have a very different context an special mind which i liked most was i saw my sisther

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  48. this video i didn't like too much
    this video is very simple ,
    it need something for the video
    but the dog is very beutiful and i like it

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  49. Manuela Morales Morales 9B
    I enjoyed so much this shortfilm, it was interesting, different and funny. I love the music of the film.
    The actors did a great job and the dog is really cute, he is a great actor too.

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  50. Maria Alejandra Aguilar Arroyave 9A
    This video is so funny. it was a very good idea to did it without speaking, it makes it different. but i think they could do the footprints more real

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  51. Susana Martinez 8B #21

    It was funny short films, and also the fact that it was not known who or what was it that broke the vase, I found very interesting.

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  52. Alejandra Martinez 10 b
    is a story out of the ordinary and I really liked is funny and entertaining.

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  53. i think that is a god story i liked a lot that the persins doesnt speak. is very funny and
    entertaining

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  54. LAURA RESTREPO GARCIA 9B
    THE VIDEO IS SO FUNNY, IS A GOOD STORY AND I LIKED SO MUCH, CONGRATULATIONS.

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  55. SARA LOPERA ROJAS 9A I DONTI LIKE THIS SHORT FILM WAS BORING ,THE HISTORY HAS NOT SENSE AND THE CHARACTERS DONT SPEAK TOO MUCH AND THAT MAKES THAT THE PEOPLE DONT BE CONCENTRATED IN THE MOVIE

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  56. vanesa gomez 8B
    the monster of the toilet is very interesting but I think the suspense that had openings complete, but is very well recorded!

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  57. maria carolina benitez 8B
    the plot was very good as how to find the problem also seemed to me very well super well recorded in the form of plans and am very good of all forms

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